The Arts of Shivam

it looks very nice i really love it!

No problem

V2 Sharpened too much ! (Maybe)

Text positioning bad
Blending required 
Reduce scrachiness in bg

Thanks for the comment! I'll try better new time. 

yeah the text position and blending, the bg looks cool imo.

too bright,need some depth, nice flow,render need to blend more, good work KIU

already comment at OPAE

Text looks cool, but I think you should've blended the render in a bit more...and the bg is plain. Awesome lighting though, and you did a really good job considering the render  (I saw it at OPAE)

It looks very good,I love it!
I liked the render!

Nice sig BUT not good in terms of C 4D

Instead of that big ball (too easy,try something challenging)use c4d for lighting (see Mark's contest 1 sig to get how to do it )

OK I'LL make one and pm you the layers...Will that be OK?

Liked the colors  

Bg nice !

Nice text design , though placement of the three words can be better if Izumi text is in middle of the three..(MAY BE BETTER, JUST MY OPINION)

Konata text can be improved..(either font wise or texture/transperancy wise)

Need to work on FBD !

Light source ?? Focal??

White brushing around render not a good way to blend , try to figure out a better way !

Looks awesome bro!

Your render is a bit too bright for my tastes (I tend to be a morbid at times with value and saturation in my sigs)
I would also blend the render a bit more, like soft erase the edges a bit perhaps?

+1 from me xD

Liked it ! ..Just Work more on the finishing.. 

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooow!can i use it?

Thank you very very much!Yaaaaaaaaaay!

Times have changed..
You are not a begineer anymore !

From now on I will be critical in my comments..So don't feel sad..

C&C : Its just a simple basic smudge !!!

COULD YOU PLEASE SHOW ME YOUR OTHER LATEST SIGNS?

LET ME SEE WHAT YOU HAVE DEVELOPED !

^True, its so simple, go add some c4ds and effects, a text would be great u can make alot better than that man, KIU

Shivam : Do you want me to give c. &c ?

If yes,do you want those 3to be rated/commented or both?

Well , here goes :


Rate (out of 10)

1st one : 1
Lelouch : 1.5 (Zero render blending)
Jaxus : 2 (Text needs blending)