The title said it. Now post your C&Cs on these A-W-E-S-O-M-E things xD.
The Arts of Shivam
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 12:18 pm
Shivam

Okay, the first signature is...
Death the Kid!!

C&C
Death the Kid!!

C&C

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 12:56 pm
Maxlance

Lightning
Simply Amazing !
One of your bests !
This is completely new from you !
The brightness control is superb !
It deserves 10/10 !
One of your bests !
This is completely new from you !
The brightness control is superb !
It deserves 10/10 !

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 7:20 pm
Mario

Lightning
Mind blowin',just one thing,I dislike the font.
9/10
9/10

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 7:59 pm
Shivam

Thanks.
I can't use my own Laptop so I had to make do with what I got.
I can't use my own Laptop so I had to make do with what I got.
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 9:15 pm
G man

Aqua
Now let's see here...
Render is a bit too sharpen. It's nice to sharpen your render but not too much.
I didn't like the white lights on his head, the don't fit well enough.
The text is really "meh", and the green text should be siler.
The golw is a bit overdone, try setting it to color dodge and lower the ocpacity.
The background can have more effects imo.
Overall good work.
7.5/10.
Render is a bit too sharpen. It's nice to sharpen your render but not too much.
I didn't like the white lights on his head, the don't fit well enough.
The text is really "meh", and the green text should be siler.
The golw is a bit overdone, try setting it to color dodge and lower the ocpacity.
The background can have more effects imo.
Overall good work.
7.5/10.
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 9:54 pm
Shivam

I didn't relised that I sharpened too much, good thing that I got bored or else I would've done more... And when you said "white lights", did you meant those 3 stripes in his hair? If yes, then please google "Death the Kid" and you'll understand why they're there.
Again, I can't really do anything about text and I like to keep my signatures clean and simple, so I didn't used many effects
Thanks for C&C, 1
Again, I can't really do anything about text and I like to keep my signatures clean and simple, so I didn't used many effects

Thanks for C&C, 1
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 10:06 pm
Maxlance

Lightning
As Gman said , text is thick...
When you get on your laptop, you can try to reduce the text thickening which is required to improve the clarity.
When you get on your laptop, you can try to reduce the text thickening which is required to improve the clarity.

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 11:49 pm
Shivam

I plan on doing that. Can anyone tell what should I do to make text better?
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Mon May 27, 2013 12:15 am
Maxlance

Lightning
Just wait till next Sunday ..
After that I will be completely free and will help you to improve the text ...
After that I will be completely free and will help you to improve the text ...
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Mon May 27, 2013 12:26 am
G man

Aqua
Try making the text colors about the same as the render's, for a start.
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 01, 2013 12:57 pm
Shivam


Just remembered I haven't post it here yet so, posted here now.
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 01, 2013 1:02 pm
Zenesis

look nice =_= the border draw more focal than render (darken color for border), good work btw
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun Jun 02, 2013 12:39 am
Midnight-Jasper

Hey, I really like the Death the Kid sig, I think it looks great and the border seals the deal. Although I dislike the text as well
The positioning is nice but the font and the gradient to black - it's alright on the 'Death' but on the 'The' it's much harder to read. The green stands out as well, it should be muted a little.
I agree with the others about sharpening as well. Sharpen your focal or whatever you want to draw attention to, don't sharpen it all. I didn't completely notice at first, but on the left gun of 'Death the Kid' (as well as other places) and the lines of Ichigo's clothing, you can see individual pixels. They may have been there originally but sharpening accentuates the effect. Don't sharpen so much that you lose nice smooth lines

I agree with the others about sharpening as well. Sharpen your focal or whatever you want to draw attention to, don't sharpen it all. I didn't completely notice at first, but on the left gun of 'Death the Kid' (as well as other places) and the lines of Ichigo's clothing, you can see individual pixels. They may have been there originally but sharpening accentuates the effect. Don't sharpen so much that you lose nice smooth lines

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun Jun 02, 2013 1:09 am
Maxlance

Lightning
The bg and the shirt colour : Awesome
Eyes need improvement though...
Eyes need improvement though...

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 12:29 pm
Shivam

Thanks for the comments. Here are two new things.
Mio Avy,

and a Signature that I made by trying to copy Zee-chan's style,

Mio Avy,

and a Signature that I made by trying to copy Zee-chan's style,

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:04 pm
Zenesis

now i only C&C at showcase =_=
Avatar : look nice but i didn't like text much,
Signature : my style ? you mean this ?
=_= can you feel the different ? well you choose a bad render =_= when you put c4d make sure it follow the flow (from render) and contrast look bad =_= KIU
Avatar : look nice but i didn't like text much,
Signature : my style ? you mean this ?
- Spoiler:
=_= can you feel the different ? well you choose a bad render =_= when you put c4d make sure it follow the flow (from render) and contrast look bad =_= KIU
- Some Good Quality Gia Render:
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:20 pm
Shivam

Thanks for C&C and Renders. I'll make new one later.
+1
+1
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:23 pm
Mario

Lightning
Ava: truly awesome..exept for the thing around the text, maybe add stroke on the opacity of 1.I would give it a....9/10.
sign: awesome blending but the render is pixlated and there is no text.. so a.....7/10. hope i helped!
sign: awesome blending but the render is pixlated and there is no text.. so a.....7/10. hope i helped!

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Wed Jun 05, 2013 3:00 am
Maxlance

Lightning
Shivam : Can you post the render of your avatar ?


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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:31 am
Shivam

No problem. Anyway, here's the new avy I made.


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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:48 am
Maxlance

Lightning
Looks nice
.( Although doesn't have any resemblance to a ghost)
I'll pm you something..see that !


I'll pm you something..see that !


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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 6:14 pm
Shivam

Thanks for the comments ^^
Here a new one.

C&C, please.
Here a new one.
C&C, please.
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:44 pm
Guest
Guest
i think its awesome, but a bit too bright/sharp, 8.5/10
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:56 pm
Shivam

I wanted to make it bright-ish, but I think I over did it. 

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 8:05 pm
Shivam

Ooh, so I got weapon that can hurt eyes. Awesome.
Thanks for the C&C, by the way.
Thanks for the C&C, by the way.
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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:45 pm
Maxlance

Lightning
Shivam: Do you use photoshop (which version) or GIMP ?

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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 10:39 pm
Maxlance

Lightning
Undoubtedly,the lighting is TOOOOOOOOOO Much..
Even then Your signature will become 11/10 if you just apply the steps that I'm PMing you...Read carefully and apply exactly and
SEE THE MAGIC !

Even then Your signature will become 11/10 if you just apply the steps that I'm PMing you...Read carefully and apply exactly and
SEE THE MAGIC !


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Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun Jun 09, 2013 12:10 am
Shivam

@Max: Screw what I said before! It looks amazing. Thank you so~ much.

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